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  • Oliver Douglas
    #1

    Little Acorns


    Take all your problems
    And rip 'em apart

    Carry them off
    In a shopping cart

    And another thing
    You should've known from the start
    The problems in hand
    Are lighter than at heart

    Be like the squirrel, girl
    Be like the squirrel
    Give it a whirl, girl
    Be like the squirrel

    And another thing
    You have to know in this world
    Cut up your hair
    Straighten your curls

    Well, your problems
    Hide in your curls

    (ws)


    --
    http://www.timvp.com/greenacr.html


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    • Double-A
      #2
      Re: Little Acorns

      "Oliver Douglas" <jabailo@earthl ink.net> wrote in message news:<925ab212a bad840bde986980 f90e47a8@news.t eranews.com>...[color=blue]
      > Take all your problems
      > And rip 'em apart
      >
      > Carry them off
      > In a shopping cart
      >
      > And another thing
      > You should've known from the start
      > The problems in hand
      > Are lighter than at heart
      >
      > Be like the squirrel, girl
      > Be like the squirrel
      > Give it a whirl, girl
      > Be like the squirrel
      >
      > And another thing
      > You have to know in this world
      > Cut up your hair
      > Straighten your curls
      >
      > Well, your problems
      > Hide in your curls
      >
      > (ws)[/color]


      Meter needs work.

      Rhyming needs work.


      The Poetry Critic
      alt.sci.physics

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        • Gordon L. Richard
          #3
          Re: Little Acorns

          On 16 Oct 2003 11:17:33 -0700, double-a@hush.com (Double-A)
          wrote:
          [color=blue]
          >"Oliver Douglas" <jabailo@earthl ink.net> wrote in message news:<925ab212a bad840bde986980 f90e47a8@news.t eranews.com>...[color=green]
          >> Take all your problems
          >> And rip 'em apart
          >>
          >> Carry them off
          >> In a shopping cart
          >>
          >> And another thing
          >> You should've known from the start
          >> The problems in hand
          >> Are lighter than at heart
          >>
          >> Be like the squirrel, girl
          >> Be like the squirrel
          >> Give it a whirl, girl
          >> Be like the squirrel
          >>
          >> And another thing
          >> You have to know in this world
          >> Cut up your hair
          >> Straighten your curls
          >>
          >> Well, your problems
          >> Hide in your curls
          >>
          >> (ws)[/color]
          >
          >
          >Meter needs work.
          >
          >Rhyming needs work.
          >
          >
          >The Poetry Critic
          >alt.sci.physic s
          >[/color]
          Yeah,
          The poet didn't knowit,
          but the meter petered out.

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